Poem -
In The Night
I am feeling the dark now
I am true to the emptiness
I know somehow
That the world is in regress
I am sure that the light exists
But unsure of my soul
I wonder that the lemmings cliffs
Will make me whole
And take from me
My mother's breast......
Tony....
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Hello Tony...
Is it difficult to come back when someone's credibility is shot?
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Feathers
Hey FEATHERS!!....glad you liked my friend......but i'm not sure what
you meant by the remainder of your comment......hope all is well
with you dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!,.....T xo : )
We were all not breastfedĀ
TT
Our Mothers titsĀ
need more respect
put down theĀ
Bottle
popop
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Hey thanx for reading my friend.......I don't drink....so I think metaphorically the poem itself and its intent are valid........I meant no offense to anyone!!....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
rewrite the last line
Trust me
Hi Tony,
I for one enjoyed the write.
John
Hey JOHN!!....thank you so much.....glad you enjoyed
the write.......stay groovy brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo : )
Don't mind popop rifici Tony, he/she is a bad egg, a waste of space.
Hello NINE ELEVEN!!....while I appreciate the way cool
reply I can't say honestly that anyone is a waste of space.
However, I haven't been around much in the last year so
I don't know what's been going on and perhaps you are
aware things that I am not. Please allow me to humbly
say that I appreciate your support dear poet . I am
going to your page now to catch up with your stuff!! I
think anyone who spends time writing poetry is a gift!!
Stay groovy.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Hello Sir T. I am happy that I scrolled through this morning.
Its been a long time coming. Hope you are doing well
The light is beyond the clouds but the wind is on your side to blow those dark clouds away.
Your intelligence and mannerism shines in your response.
Peace and love my friend.
Sir BARKER!!....I am so happy to hear from you....thank you
so much for the comment....It's always great to hear from a
friend and I consider you a friend.....you always pop up atĀ
the perfect moment!!......Thanx again dear poet brother!!
Hope all is well with you and yours!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo : )
Incredibly dark yet most graceful. š¹Ā