Poem -
In Time Passing
The pendulum swings
Back and forth
Dripping
South, then North
Was it incorruptible faith
Which shone its light,
Stun ~ my sanity melting
Or just time ~ passing
And my faith
Ticking
For now it shines so brightly
That
In nights darkness
Alone,
I am transported
By a blissful inclination
To pay
To taste advanced meditation's
Endeavor,
That which I am also
So afraid
Of slipping slightly through,
I may have let down
My Theocentric
Eccentricity,
While I simply
Searched,
Oh so desperately,
For the truth
In time,
Passing...
Tony Taylor
(a work in progress with the help of Mr. Dali)
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This personal introspective write about searching for the truth while time passes, is applicable for our nation at large, where the concept of truth is drowning in a world of lies.
Very Cool KIMMY!!!!....thanx so much....... your feedback is always MORE than a pleasure my friend!!..... truly find interpretation .......hugs-n-high fives!!...... your friend and admirer !!.......T xo. ?☀✴✳
The constant presence of elapsing time with its effect on our psychological state and the application of faith in governing ones reasoning and core ideals combine to produce a weighty piece, reflecting a consideration of the magnitude of creation in relation to our relevance or place within it.
As life progresses there is an inevitable reinterpretation of an individuals worth in the grand design and an appraisal of the role played in that design. Being nearer the end of life focuses attention on higher matters of understanding with an evaluation of how experience correlates to the moulding of a belief system.
Substantial reflective poem !
Wishing you the very best. Take care my friend. :)
Dear Poet Brother SIR WATERS!!
What an exquisite comment my friend....... coming from a place a profound understanding and amazing grasp and/or comprehension of the written word....... makes me feel somehow that we two are on the same page!!.......thanx again my friend.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!..... your friend and admirer!!.......T xo. ?☀✴✳
:) All the best to you.
~ Gary Larson
I love this piece. A searching and beautifully written meditation on time, the nature of reality and a lot more besides...seen through the visionary prism of one of the greatest artists of the 20th (or any other) Century.
Less "a work in progress" ... more a poetical-artistic quest; one which will never truly end...as all the great quests go on...it's just the names of the knights that change.
...I rather doubt it!!
J ;)
Oh my God JASON!!....a MORE than fine comment and comprehension of my attempt here to accomplish that which you so eloquently conveyed here....... one of the best pieces of feedback I have EVER received ........the quote you highlighted from my poem made my inner self jump for joy that anyone would find the one line I was truly proud of.......I thank you kind sir....... this kind of comprehension is worth gold to any writer...... again.......I Thank You....... your friend and admirer!!........T xo ?☀✴