Poem - 15 January 2016, 06:13

INK OF INFATUATION

stroke of your inkling
brushes all over on my
bare grammar of infatuation
the ingenious infusion of your
verb wrapping all my words
and makes a sentence
that consists
the content of you and me
copyright reserved ...Rainy.

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Tony Taylor15 January 2016, 06:26

Well ~ Rainy!!.........that was fun!!........an interesting bit of word play.......I think you may have something.........but ........I haven't read any of your other stuff (my loss)...........just one thing (no harm intended) if you broke your lines differently ~ this would be more profound!!..........just a suggestion because I know how poets are about their stuff ~ me included.............anyway, I think you're good my new cyber-friend!!........keep 'em coming.............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo

Rainy15 January 2016, 06:28

yes just tried a little word play and am glad for your comment .Do comments I feel good to learn cheerss Tony..

Rainy15 January 2016, 06:30

yes just tried a little word play and am glad for your comment .Do comments I feel good to learn cheerss Tony..

and yes you are right I will try to break it thankx for your suggestion and I take myself a learner always