Inking flight mode muse
As black as my birdlover poet's pen ink upon ink
Coal black as every poet's ink, hue upon hue
A rook and a raven flew flew flew,
as the wind it breezily blew blew blew
And blustery became the view, view, view
An albatross then gracefully took to the air
and for hours it seemed to linger there
Then we saw magpies rise unto the skies
As well as a kestrel soar with such flying flair
Bright toucans and brown falcons too fly and glide so divineΒ
So many wings fill up God's wide skyline
My muse quill's refill is bird's feathers and quills today.
All these avians rise and shine with 'flying colours'.
Their flight enabled and powered by divine powers
O' birds of flight your secrets tell
and if you know which of us
had end up in heaven or hell?
For isn't all is well that ends well.
Lets pray there ain't hell's flamesΒ
but rather Eden's light
at the end of the tunnel.
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Comments
what a wonderful ink thanks for sharing
Im glad you found it good enough.Β I try to make it entertaining.Β
Thanks for feedback,Β
Wonderful and the birds are adorableΒ :)
Thanks soo much for great feedback,Β
Very clever Zaynab. Enjoyed this one as always. Hope you are well!
Thanks soo much for cool comment, for finding this as enjoyable as intended. Cheers,
Wow. I love the repetition and the rhymes.Β
Thanks for sharing πΒ
Leah
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Warmest thanks for lovely comment.Β
Hello S.zaynab...
Pinned...
Too many reasons why...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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Aw, warmest thanx for wonderful comment. Take care,
Hi S Zaynab,
Finely penned.
love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Thanks for the super comment ,Terry,
Good work
The rhythmic repetition and imagery create a captivating flow. The symbolism of birds as messengers of both divine flight and earthly mysteries adds depth.
Well-crafted!
Warmest thanks for lovely comment dear,
Thanks so much for the in flight entertainment .. it was really enjoyed :)Β
Hii Neville, yeahh soul flight, bird flight muse inflight , thanks for soaring comment. Cheers,
This felt musical, such a lovley flow like the flapping of wings
great pieceΒ
Lorna :)
Aha yeahh warmest thanks for that lovely flapping comment.Β
Lovely rhyme and flow, Zaynab x
Warm thanx for the lovely feedback,Β
I'm running late but couldn't help myself... had to read one more just to make sure...Yep I'm a fan π€π€π€