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Inking flight mode muse

Inking flight mode muse

As black as my birdlover poet's pen ink upon ink
Coal black as every poet's ink, hue upon hue
A rook and a raven flew flew flew,
as the wind it breezily blew blew blew
And blustery became the view, view, view

An albatross then gracefully took to the air
and for hours it seemed to linger there
Then we saw magpies rise unto the skies
As well as a kestrel soar with such flying flair

Bright toucans and brown falcons too fly and glide so divineΒ 
So many wings fill up God's wide skyline
My muse quill's refill is bird's feathers and quills today.

All these avians rise and shine with 'flying colours'.
Their flight enabled and powered by divine powers

O' birds of flight your secrets tell
and if you know which of us
had end up in heaven or hell?
For isn't all is well that ends well.
Lets pray there ain't hell's flamesΒ 
but rather Eden's light
at the end of the tunnel.

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Im glad you found it good enough.Β  I try to make it entertaining.Β 
Thanks for feedback,Β 

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K.G. Munro

Wonderful and the birds are adorableΒ  :)

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Thanks soo much for cool comment, for finding this as enjoyable as intended. Cheers,

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Leah Yodico

Wow. I love the repetition and the rhymes.Β 
Thanks for sharing πŸ‘Β 

Leah
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sparrowsong

Hello S.zaynab...

Pinned...

Too many reasons why...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Terry Reeves

Hi S Zaynab,
Finely penned.
love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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B.A Ankutse

Good work
The rhythmic repetition and imagery create a captivating flow. The symbolism of birds as messengers of both divine flight and earthly mysteries adds depth.
Well-crafted!

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Neville

Thanks so much for the in flight entertainment .. it was really enjoyed :)Β 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Hii Neville, yeahh soul flight, bird flight muse inflight , thanks for soaring comment. Cheers,

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Lorna

This felt musical, such a lovley flow like the flapping of wings
great pieceΒ 
Lorna :)

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Being Me

Lovely rhyme and flow, Zaynab x

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Raechel Rae

I'm running late but couldn't help myself... had to read one more just to make sure...Yep I'm a fan πŸ–€πŸ–€πŸ–€

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