Poem -
Into the dark
The time the time the time
stands still
into my thinking....rethinkingΒ
like broken waves upon the shores of foot prints
I covered myΒ face....Into darken thoughts...
reflectingΒ
a memory of you
plays itsΒ insanity
note by note by note a soundΒ
yet my silence wants to erupt in tears
of love
I must hold backΒ
I must
just for another day of love
to shield this moment....
the saddened heart
continues...to flutter in desire
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These words of wisdom I deeply savor
do me an honor by returning the favor
Thank you very much ....Lisa
"The time, the time, the time
stand still ..." Wouldn't this read better as "stands still," Lorris, given the fact that you've written "the time" more than once?
Merely an observation.
"just for another day of love
to shield this moment....
the sadden(ed) heart ... The "saddened" heart would be more correct, grammatically speaking, Lorris.
As an author of horror fiction and dark poetry for the past seventeen years, I make it no secret that enjoy a foray into the darker realms.
You do dark well, sir.
~Dean Kuch
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Thank You...appreciate your comments....peace to you.
My pleasure. :)