Poem -
Into the Darkness
ashamed I followed you
but you
you lifted me
when I was drowning above water
you turned me around
when I was in an enchantment forest
you kissed me
and I wanted to stay
without boundaries from you
are we close
are we tight
are we tangled
in a web of disgrace
do I have to let go of you
even if we have to go through
why is it so dark here
can you answer that
PLEASE
I want to be safe
ashamed of where we went
just to get here
do I lead or follow you
into the DARKNESS
of LOVE
do have to let go
I don't want this test
trying to find you in the darkness
who said we have to stop..........Together?
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Comments
beautiful piece. Welcome to Cosmofunnel. Merry Christmas and a happy new year
XX Lisa
Thank you and merry Christmas too you to
Your work is the urban equivalent of folk poetry; raw, bitter and really quite powerful.
I have one question about this piece: are the glancing references to recent Disney movies deliberate? Because, if they are, they're BRILLIANT!! Pointed, subtle and pregnant with veiled accusation.
Very powerful work...well done!
J x
Thank you and yes it is about a disney story but the real version not the kid versionΒ
Excellent! (Though it's the kid versions that always scared the hell out of me!!!)
Welcome to Cosmo.
J x
Β Compelling poetry - Β Beats Disney! ?
Β Very warm welcome to Cosmo!!
best from Jai:)
Thank you