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INTRUSION

INTRUSION

He enters into your mind...

He didn't expect what he would find...

He watched your thoughts as if he was watching a moving picture...

He follows you in your dreams...

You wake at times feeling refreshed or terrified...

He is the intrusion just waiting for a mind to enter...

Hug...

sparrowsongย 

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sparrowsong

Hello Liian...

I looked up Babadook...

I see your point...

I am not really sure...

I found this picture and it went along nicely with the title I had in my mind...

I didn't know about such a character as Babadook...

I apologize for the reminder it wasn't my intention...

If my cat knows about your four cats and we don't know each other...

Does that mean I have a super cat or do you have four super cats that speak to her?

All I can say about thatย is...

I guess you can add another cat to your love connection...

Thank you for your comment...

Take care!

Hugs...

sparrowsongย 

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J A Overton

Hi, loved this what a dark write and well penned, i like dreaming but hate nightmares although nightmares make for good poetry lolย 

cheers jeffย 

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Deborah Evans

Hi ย Sparrowsong Great write dark and menacingย 
conjuring ย up many scary scenario`s in your minds eye
I enjoyed my friendย 
Hugs Debsย 

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sparrowsong

Hello P.D...

Glad you enjoyed!ย 

Thank you very much!

Hugs...

sparrowsongย 

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sparrowsong

Hello Jeff...

A good nightmare reminds you asย you feel the sweat and your heart is pounding so fast like it's coming our of your chest...

You're still alive and the confidence of...

Ha Ha...

I won!

Glad you enjoyed!ย 

Thank you for your comment...

Cheers!

Hugs...

sparrowsongย 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

Glad you enjoyed!ย 

Thank you for kind comment...

Hugs and Smiles!ย 

sparrowsongย 

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