Poem -

INTUNE

Heart beating, but something is missing...

Feeling it beat inside...

The RYTHM is off and...

Out of tune...

Promising that when everything is complete....
The RYTHM will not remain off beat...

Happy heartbeat you will be found one day...

Then you will be intune...

Beating well again...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Tony Taylor

Hi Feathers!!......I like the open interpretation for this piece........what I got was that sometimes things may feel a little "off"..........but time heals all wounds and eventually being off beat will come around to be right in time again............this write can applied to SO MANY different scenarios!!..........I LOVE it..........well done my friend!!.............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

It's funny how we can point things out to each other with the things we write...

It gives a new way of looking at things...

Thank you for your comment partner...

Hope you are well and...

I look forward to hearing from you...

Hugz...

Feathers

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