Poem - 27 June 2017, 16:42 Invisible (15's) Lost Lying in wait bringing acid tears striking without warning born from the heart assassin grief. ©Lost Like 1 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 674 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Grief Sad Tears Poetry Genre: Freestyle 3 comments
Larry Ran30 June 2017, 07:54 Hi Lost, 15 word response to your powerful poem! A trigger is cocked Invisible bullet strikes Tears for its' victim The assassin now cries Peace and Love, Larry xxx Reply
Larry Ran01 July 2017, 08:23 I think that since you created the idea, I will limit myself to "Almost as powerful". Larry xxx Reply
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Hi Lost,
15 word response to your powerful poem!
A trigger is cocked
Invisible bullet strikes
Tears for its' victim
The assassin now cries
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
As powerful if not more. Thank you Larry
I think that since you created the idea, I will limit myself to "Almost as powerful".
Larry xxx