Poem -

IS IT YOU?

You understand the mistakes that I have made...

I was going down not a very good path...

The further down I went...

It began to look very dark...

I knew if I kept on going I wouldn't have stopped...

But,  you touched my shoulder gently and...

Turned me around...

I was all alone...

The path began to get brighter...

Is it you that would love me forever?

Is it you that showed me it's going to be okay?

Is it you that would never break my heart?

Is it you that speaks to my heart?

Is it you?

That has made me stronger?

Is it you that I found my...

Long lost laughter?

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! ~ FEATHERS!!....... this is lovely writing........ the essence flowing to a measure undeniable....... the question remains........ whether it is a friend..... or divine energy that touched your shoulder....... still........" Is It You" remains....... fervently coursing throughout this piece..........ALL STARS........ gorgeous phrasing girlfriend........... your friend and admirer..........T xo

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Devon La Porte

The hope you purveyed that shown through your darkness and lifted you off the wrong path and into the light is inspirational way of expressing that way of life when we can be depressed and we look for support to save us. I know I get in my funks, and writing is a way back to the path. Beautiful write Sparrowsong, so many can relate to this. Hope all is well. D.

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

It was divine intervention for sure...

I have been touched like that quite a few times.

I was by myself for the ones that my shoulder, hand, or my hair was touched...

The experiences that I've had each time once I figured it out...

Was that in one form or another it was letting me know that I was protected from either a loss of someone or something or protection against danger ahead of me...

Once, I was with a friend and they felt it to...

Only that time it was a different touch for me...

The first time it happened to me I was very young...

I would hear my name a lot and...

I would say yeah...

Coming and...

I would run all the way home to find out...

No one called me...

Then when they would call me...

I would get in trouble because I thought it was what had called me before and they wouldn't hear me say...

Yeah coming...

Sometimes, I couldn't tell it apart...

I will just say...

I got in trouble a lot...

I still hear it sometimes, but now I know who it isn't...

When that happens and people already think you're weird...

I wasn't going to even try to explain it...

After the third time...

No way!

Thank you for your comment my friend...

Hugz and Smiles! 

Your friend,

Feathers 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

The first time it happened I was six years old...

It was always the voice of a lady and...

I thought it was my Mom calling me home because I was out too long...

I only heard it when she was home...

Then one time it happened to me that same summer and me and my Mom were both home and...

I ran into her room and I startled her...

All I said was...

You called me...

She said No...

Then it happened again the same day...

Most of the time she was at home when it would happen...

Then there were times it would happen and...

She was at work...

Then it happened to me a few times when I was my early twenties and I was working at a nursing home...

I thought it was one of people calling me..

It was no one there...

The touches were different...

Just saying hello softly outloud and recognizing that whoever it was...

Always was good with that...

If it was a guy I was too little for a boyfriend...

I was not girlfriend material especially when I had mud in my hand...

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Soul Sis...

I am not sure why it was happening to me...

I had been through some things that no child should have to endure...

Not knowing the reasons why I had to...

It was easy if someone said God hated me...

I would have easily believed that...

No one knew a lot of what had happened to me and...

It makes you a loner...

I had close friends and each knew a small part but, they never knew the hole story until we got older...

When one knew something the other knew something else...

Some they witnessed so they knew that stuff...

Everything helped me be who I am...

The one thing I can definitely say for myself is that someone bigger and higher than me that I couldn't see...

Had me all along...

Even when I...

Messed up...

Thank you for your comment and support! 

Purple luv and hugs xo :) 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Devon...

Thank you for your comment...

You make it sound so easy...

We both know that a downward spiral is like an upside down tornado...

Once you get in it we know you don't always make it out...

Alive...

I knew I had to live, it wasn't until I realized that I not only had to live so my children would not have to deal with that...

I had to live because I wanted to for me...

It wasn't easy...

The bad stuff is real easy to find and everyone is your friend...

When you step out and you never go back...

It's a hole new thing...

Not everyone has had a loving sheltered life...

I know I wouldn't be alive today if I was all alone...

I know if that could be done for me it could done for anyone...

They have to want it to change, before anything will...

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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