Poem -
Is there someone else here?
Is there someone else here?
maybe they're waiting for me
like I for them.
This is a vast chamber I'm stuck in,
and it's, oh, so dark
I can only hear some chatter
it's low and loud.
Is it talking back to me?
Oh, oh maybe I'm really not alone
Is there someone else here?
I scream and my throats on fire
Wait, wait, I know now
'tis was only the echo of mine
although I can hear footsteps quite fine.
But I cannot trust my senses here.
So to not get eaten by my fear,
I truly hope, that
There is someone else here...
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Hello malwa...
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Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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Hi...
YW...
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A depiction of how the mind plays tricks or is it? Could this be a metaphor for internal confusion? Something we all suffer from at times. Either way it is a well constructed poem. I like how the question at the beginning becomes a statement by the end. And also a sort of self fulfilling prophecy. Vast chamber definitely suits the mind. Just saying. Whether right or wrong I like the way you have constructed this poem.
I can feel the angst reading this... a troubled mind well conveyed Malwa.
hugs x
Better to trust ones self than another, though learning it might take