Poem -
IT HURTS
Why has my heart stopped beating,
I'm upset and crying and I'm not lying,
You have broken me for the fourth time now
You mean everything to me as you well know ,
I had fallen for you hook line and sinker ,
but it seems it was a one way blinker,
And yet you call me a nasty bitch,
Very uncalled for I must insist ,
I'm just a normal person with genuine feelings
I think I fell for you without even realizing,
With my heart broken again so sore
I can only wish I could give you more .
But alas you wont give me that chance
So it seems I have to, find a new Romance .
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Comments
Sad but with the positive attitude ?
Thank you Edward , it really will be a positive outcome
My Dear Audrey,
This poem brings tears to one's eyes. I give you a Haiku in response.
She loves the wrong man
But some day, her heart will smile
For the right one comes
Love,
Larry xxx
Larry thank you for your kind words ,,, but alas all imagination on my part x
Aubrey, I always sing that old song, Everybody plays the fool sometimes..there is no exception to the rule...to friends and even myself! Great write. Terry Kay
Thank you Terry ,words of wisdom from a fellow poet ,,, x
That's right girl we stick together!? Good evening! Terry Kay
We should all stick to gether ,,womens rights and all that ,but still the men come out of things better off than us women , lol that will start a war Haha
Audrey, That has been my experience. We are in agreement..a great base for a mutual friendship poet sister! You have a good evening. ? Terry Kay
That would be really nice Terry , all my friends call me Orge pronounced Or Ja,xx
Orge, I can see why you tell people how it's pronounced cause that's not what I thought?! Just couldn't help but kid around a little....welcome to Cosmo.. I'm going to go read some more of your poems....poet girlfriend.. Love, Terry Kay
Awwww thanks Terry ,,I hope you like some of them xx
Well written Audrey x
Awww your reading them ,hope you enjoy ,,thank you for you comments x