~~IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT
“Come on confess it’s all your fault”
Words hit my heart like a lightning bolt
Taking away all that was me
Taking away my identity
Many harsh words brought many tears
Feeling useless filled with fear
Not knowing what next I must do
“It wasn’t my fault it’s all about you
I am not guilty that can’t be
I didn’t do it NO not me”
Where did I go in all of this
I don’t recognize me something’s amiss
I just want to love and live in peace
But that hasn’t happened I need release
To be the person I really am
Not roughly treated pressed down by man
I need to rise up on the wings of love
To soar up high like a pure white dove
No longer bound by cruel harsh words
But flying in freedom just like a bird
No longer tormented no longer in pain
But just being me .. me again
Not fighting tears and being brave
Enjoying the life that Father God gave
Enjoying the fullness.. everything
But most of all to worship my King
The King of men the King of hosts
My everything the one I love most!!!
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Comments
Hi Lyn, I really liked this write, you have control of your rhyme scheme.........and I could feel the longing this piece,...........the timing was dead on................strong write my friend..........well done.......tony xx
Thank you Tony so much for your comment! xx
Beauty of thoughts are obvious, "Come on confess it's all your fault"..confession is very essential to wipe off heaviness of the soul...moreover concluding lines are also much powerful.." Not fighting tears and being brave, Enjoying the life that Father God gave, Enjoying the fullness..everything, But most of all to worship my king, The king of men the king of hosts, My everything the one I love most!!"..intention goes towards disobedient children...I think,. we are right or wrong but it is our duty to respect parents by all means...with regards...xx Ravindra Kumar xx
Ravindra..thank you so much for your comment.. regards back to you xx
Thank you Tony so much for your comment! xx
A beautiful poem sweety. Well written and with wonderful fluidity. A stunning piece. Well done love G xx
Thank you Georgina..(((hugs))) xxx