Poem -
ITS OK...
It's ok
if you stumble
on the mountain son
It's ok
if the journey
makes you breathless
It's ok
if your foothold
is a little shaky
It's ok
to ask for help
or to take a rest
It's ok
to stop a while
and admire the beauty
It's ok
if you look down
get a little scared
It's
not ok
to fall off
just keep climbing son
keep climbing
the mountain...
Marion Price(2020)
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Comments
Wonderful!
The repetition of the words, It's ok -- evoked a feeling of love, hope and encouragement.
The ending is perfect.
Thankyou so much my friend...so sorry for late reply ?
I think this is so important...we should all do it! Great little inspirational poem, Marion x
Aw thankyou love...sorry for late reply ?
Brilliant Marion very true and honest write well done
Thanks Simon so sorry for late reply...trying to catch up...??
My Dear Lady Marion,
Your brilliant, touching inspiration to a son, brought tears to my eyes, bringing back memories of my dearly departed Mother, and what an inspiration she was for me. Pinned and treasured.
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thanks Larry...it is written from the heart to a precious 'troubled' child ...hugs ?