Poem -

Its Personal

Its Personal

this poet
has
A
Reputation 
Of ✍ writing 
on extremely 
Diverse
And
Often
Controversial 
Subjects

So when
Occasionally 
An unsavory 
Critic 
Trolls
On
My
Page

I really
Don't 
Care

I am 
A confessional 
Imagist 
Who
Thrives
On
The
Fact
that
My
Work
Is
original
and
the
Content
Is
Distinctive 
To
the
poet's
Ink......

However
When
A poem
Is
Written
That
Expresses
The
Anguish
That
This
Writer.feels
Over
The
Death
Of
His
Father
And
a
Fellow
Poet
provides
2 stars
And
jibberish 
As
Comments
It becomes
personal

no one 
Really
Cares
About
Rubbish
That
Exhausts
the 
Readers.eyes
About
An
Encounter 
with
" Mary Lou Jenkins"

Infact
I would
venture
To
Say
Your reader
Would
prefer
That
You
Would
enroll
In
A basic
Writing
Course
At
Your local
Community
College

The poems
You write
Would
Love
You
And the
Poor soul
Who
Stumbles
Across
Your
Work
will
Be saved
The constipation
Your current
? pen
Infects
Others
with.........

 

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Being Me

I saw that comment. I didn't understand it to be honest. Maybe that person is having a difficult time themselves, and is struggling...I dont know. As for the stars...well... that is just his opinion, my dear friend. Please dont take this incident to heart. You have got a very good write out of it though ?   ? x
 

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author
GREG TUCKER THE...

Yeah normally I don't take it personal but the poem i wrote about my dad " Apathy" came directly from the pain I am experiencing, so his rating and rambling was very offensive.  

 

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author
Being Me

I can understand that...hugs x

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author
Katina Woodruff...

I could feel the power in your words, you sounded hurt about something that another person said during your worst of time. What I liked about the poem was the sarcasm, there was a touch of humor or that could be just the sarcasm. I also liked the ending. 

Favorite part: 

Distinctive 
To
the
poet's
Ink......

The format of your poetry is always creative and unique. 

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