It's What I Choose To Believe
Sitting...pondering....
In one's difference does,
As one follower often do.
There is no conclusion to thought,
No finality to ideas,
Longing heartily to develop,
A much harder process to retain.
Even though progression slow,
It is in me eminent.
Yellow heart,
Still beats bloody red,
Pumped full of impurities,
Corruption of mind's eye,
Seeing all that is wrong,
Not sold on everything right.
If almighty is in me,
And I him, his image,
Faltering not to fail,
By the guide of altered words.
Persuading of choice,
Not so easily swayed,
Sometimes persuasions voice,
Helps to fill in the blank page.
In one's pondering.....puzzled,
Not all ventures deduced in explanation,
Golden heart,
Resilient of ill will,
Beats believing in one's self.
Awake of day dream,
With promise of dream night,
I seal an emblem on my individuality,
Thus thrusts me through,
The steel curtains of time,
Opposed of life's evil.
What is man I think,
Without belief,
The very question why,
I choose to believe.
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Comments
So well said and written, Devon...yes the 'will' is indeed the governing body of us all, where choices are made and plans are conceived...I'm in awe at the flow of this poem, the syntax of each line is pure, and independent and melts into the theme to create a unique tapestry of movement and ideas coming together, superb articulation and construction, as well...enjoyed this write, plenty...cheersÂ
Hi Devon! I completely agree with Chris...I was blown away when I read each line...the structure of this poem and the way your words flow is very unique. Much enjoyed!! 5*s
Val ♥
Im so thrilled to hear such great compliments Christopher man thank you you truly appreciate the entire poem through and through. And Val thank you as well it is hard to follow up after christropher's comment but im so happy you loved it i worked very hard on this one. I have done a lot of reading the past few days and i wanted to write something different expressing myself as an individual through the way i think and believe. Thanks again im so stoked!
Thank you Cherie it is as I deeply expressed in my poem a reason we thrive to live gain knowledge particularly better oneself iam very much into individuality it is very interesting cause it deals with all facets of life. It means so much to me to have your praise thanks again C.