It is hard at times to be attractive( I did not have this problem, LOL). Some feel that they were slighted even though it is no ones fault for the way they look. If more people found out that the way you feel inside...makes the outer appearance better as well! Good job, Anthony
Thanks Anthony! Jealousy seems to be the reason why girls act the way they do. I will never understand girls like that and I think it is funny and sad at the same time. I had fun writing this one haha
Really enjoyed seeing you write in such powerful emotions Valerie, such as, (I got what you want, i got what they need), attitude..Haters will be haters and you deserve to be who you are without guilt feelings attached...
Really enjoyed how you allowed envy to not down play you, in this one and presented a (i got what you want and i got what i need ) attitude, to all haters..Haters will be haters and guilt feelings she never be attached, to how you want to be perceived in life are how you want to feel about yourself...Go get-um Valerie....Reminds me of Ms. Iman Z there for a split second there...
Hi Jim! Your comment was awesome haha I loved it! I like how you said that about Iman she is such an amazing writer and I felt honored when she mentioned these lines in her poem. I admire you both! So very talented :)
Comments
Valerie Lynn,
Picture is highly poetic, Verse is realistic. Wonderful Pen. I love your short poem.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI
THANK YOU WILLIAMSJI!!! Your comment is very inspirational and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Much Love,
Val <3
It is hard at times to be attractive( I did not have this problem, LOL). Some feel that they were slighted even though it is no ones fault for the way they look. If more people found out that the way you feel inside...makes the outer appearance better as well! Good job, Anthony
Thanks Anthony! Jealousy seems to be the reason why girls act the way they do. I will never understand girls like that and I think it is funny and sad at the same time. I had fun writing this one haha
Much Love :)
Val <3
Rock on Valerie,
Really enjoyed seeing you write in such powerful emotions Valerie, such as, (I got what you want, i got what they need), attitude..Haters will be haters and you deserve to be who you are without guilt feelings attached...
Great write Val,
Jim
Rock on Valerie,
Really enjoyed how you allowed envy to not down play you, in this one and presented a (i got what you want and i got what i need ) attitude, to all haters..Haters will be haters and guilt feelings she never be attached, to how you want to be perceived in life are how you want to feel about yourself...Go get-um Valerie....Reminds me of Ms. Iman Z there for a split second there...
Take Care,
Jim
Hi Jim! Your comment was awesome haha I loved it! I like how you said that about Iman she is such an amazing writer and I felt honored when she mentioned these lines in her poem. I admire you both! So very talented :)
Val <3