thank you robert. I have written in rhyme scheme ever since I can remember I started writing when I was about ten. I am over fifty now so I've had loads of practice
WOW!! is not enough for this piece!!......there is so much to this VERY heady piece about the do's and dont's of the Djinn!!.....Love to pick your brain about that subject matter some time!!.......PINNED!!.....your mighty pen has delivered this beautifully dear poet sister!!......LOVE *& ROCKETS!!....T xoΒ :Β )
Ps.Β LOVE the picture!!
A soul owed.Β
To whom and who I wonder, and poor woman, a tale told well a modern dark version of Aladin.Β
Great poem. great write.Β
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really cool write POETESSDARKLY!.......................................................Jim
thank you Jim
Loved the rhyme scheme and to what efforts it seems you went to achieve it. (if you claim it was natural and unrehearsed....I'll be jealous)
Very entertaining topic, story and READ!
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thank you robert. I have written in rhyme scheme ever since I can remember I started writing when I was about ten. I am over fifty now so I've had loads of practice
I'm not mad, it's claimed talent and experience..... I had a feeling it was: so felt rather than READ! kudos and mad respect, greatly enjoyed! ~RobΒ
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WOW!! is not enough for this piece!!......there is so much to this VERY heady piece about the do's and dont's of the Djinn!!.....Love to pick your brain about that subject matter some time!!.......PINNED!!.....your mighty pen has delivered this beautifully dear poet sister!!......LOVE *& ROCKETS!!....T xoΒ :Β )
Ps.Β LOVE the picture!!
thank you Tony I usually find inspiration from a movie or on the yahoo front page. occationally I find some on cosmofunnel ;)
A soul owed.Β
To whom and who I wonder, and poor woman, a tale told well a modern dark version of Aladin.Β
Great poem. great write.Β
ββββββ
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I watched a really creepy movie called Djinn it was the inspiration for this
thank you Liliana
New horror movie I'll have to watch it.Β
the movie was from 2021 called "The Dijinn"