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Being Me

It is definitely all about the journey! A neat haiku Jim x

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Marion

This is short for you Jim but very sweet...wise words đź’•

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Gwendoline

Wow Jim, what a truly insightful little piece here. So much in so few words, really packing a punch. Wonderful uplifting read to remind us it is all about the journey 
Thank you 
Gwen x 

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Liliana of the ...

Suffering and pain, are the same thing.
Ponders get stuck pondering. 

Better to suffer from the pain of sticking to your own beliefs. 

Than to cave and do as ones told to suffer anyway. 

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Shaun Cronick

Jim a neat haiku and its three lines say it all and so soulfully.
A real thought-provoking journey and that is what needed to instil in people and who knows perhaps they become a better person.
For in the end it's all about reflection of one's soul.
Thanks for sharing Jim and poetic kudos to you too.

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Neville

A little gem if ever there was sir .. a perfect 5 7 5 and just for the record, one of my favourite poetic forms ....................................... Neville :)

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