Just one more.....
I bin bad aginΒ
Forgive me honey doβ¦
I bin bad agin...
And this time..its to you..
I really donβt appreciate the kindness that you give,
In factΒ I bin so bad my babeΒ
I really shouldnβt live.
You only say the nicest things that make me fill with shame,
but hell Iβm just a no good gal whoβll always do the same!
You bale me out and take me home and tuck me in my bed,
butΒ no one ever tries to sort what goes on in my head.
These thoughts I think and then forgit and just pick up a glass
Someone should grab me by the throat and kick me in the ass
I do it all to block it out, the anger and the pain,
but nothinβ ever changes and I do it all again.
So yeah,Im sorry honey,that I let you down some more,
but no one cares enough to hold the bottle whilst I pour
forgive the spelling etc..all counts towards the piece..
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This is phenomenal!! I can hear her talking as I'm reading it! very VERY compelling imagery..You are a real talent - well done!
Wow Steviec, thanks so much for your encouragement, appreciation and comments!- It really does mean a lot to receive them-Thank you xx
Lodigiana
wow...it sounds just like what would play in your head as you drink into a stupor. I love it Ana.
Hi Ana (hope I can call you that),Β Thanks for your comments - that was just the scenario I was trying to capture-! so glad you felt that! :) 'cheers' for your kind words- I'll drink to that!Β xxx
Lodigiana
I was calling you Ana lol my name is Lisa.... but it is a most exceptional name.
hahaha! you must realise that you are dealing with a slightly dodderyΒ old dear here! this is so funny - and please do call me Ana - I love it and it's so much nicer than a lot of names I am called!! ps I also see now you have bracketed your name with Lisa....well what can I say ?!!! I'm aΒ totalΒ dipstick!! Big hugs xxx
You are most talented and we all have senior moments even if you aren't.. lol