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Just like an open wound

Just like an open wound

It was good, it was fun,

Just wild with a bit more fun.

Then everything changed

with the sudden gush of the wind.

Your voice, face and touch

never seem to be where I am,

instead I see it in front of me,

like a movie rolling with no end.

I know it ain`t the same

but whenever I`m alone, it pours...

... the memories inside!

I`d hold the phone in my hands,

type your number coz I miss hearing from you,

until it all came back to me.

Not being able to text or call you

ripped my heart in bits.

And all I`m left with is all this predicament.

Blaming myself, hurting even more

Just like an open wound! 

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Nardine Sanderson

Such a sad reality :( big hugs, beautiful thoughts right here xo much love nardine

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Hendriette Lynne

I just want to know what people think when they end everything. yet they know that the love in tht relationship is real...

is it too much too love someone?

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Tony Taylor

Hey Hendriette!!........so glad I caught this.........I think everyone who reads this will be able to relate.........VERY compelling write and so very well conveyed...........the pain that goes along with opening yourself up to a Love is always worth it..........I know it doesn't  feel that way when you're in the midst of the pain of rejection or deception that often accompanies opening yourself up.........becoming vulnerable.........but...........I have had my heart CRUSHED twice.........and at the time I thought I'd die.........experiencing pain in places I didn't even know existed............but after time passes........the wounds heal a little and (for me personally) I found that I was the better for having gone through it...........I know this is a bit cliché ........but.....    it really is  "better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all"..............thanx so much for sharing this with us all my friend..............well done............hugs-n-smiles..........T xo

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Hendriette Lynne

Thank you Tony Taylor.... I will try to remember your words for as long as I can try. truth is I get you and understand that it always happens for a reason but I just don`t see why it has to hurt so much!

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