Poem - 01 December 2020, 15:06

JUST RESTING

I sat for a while under that big
old tree today
The one that you like
I was real grateful to it's shade
for making space for me
The crocus shoots were all around
I was careful not to crush them
I pay a special mind these days
To what lies beneath my feet
Now that you do too

Marion Price (2020)

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Jim "The Lad" ....01 December 2020, 15:33

" Hope springs eternal" Looking forward but I try to watch my step as well! nice one Marion!.............Jim

Marion02 December 2020, 02:45

Thanks so much Jim x

Nigel Cresswell...01 December 2020, 18:00

Just simply beautiful.
Thanks Marion
Nigel

Marion02 December 2020, 02:41

Thanks so much Nigel x

John Prophet01 December 2020, 18:26

Very nice MP

Marion02 December 2020, 02:44

Thankyou John x

The fish of the sea01 December 2020, 20:31

Agreed with all the poets on here. Such a simple yet lovely read. Clear message and theme. All-stars here! Similes too. Hope you're well. Your friend, Max

Marion02 December 2020, 00:12

Hi Max thankyou my friend x