The tears from the pain
Won't ever go away
Will they?
I imagined you would be
The one to save me
Why does suicide have to be a sin?
I guess this time
God, you win
Well written Val, discouragement is a corridor most can relate to, poetry can reflect happiness and darkness just as easy, and you reflect the reality brilliantly, I actually found this write quite profound; how the narrative gives sway to the reasoning of God, despite a sad reality...it reads true and honest, truly a great write
Your right Val and as bad as it sounds i believe it is a fact that everyone contemplates suicide at least once in there life. Love the idea that God won.
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I really loved this.Simple and understandable. Thank you
Thank you very much!! I really appreciate your comment!!
Val ♥
Very profound and thought provoking. Powerful...
Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave me a comment!!
Much Love!
Val ♥️
Well written Val, discouragement is a corridor most can relate to, poetry can reflect happiness and darkness just as easy, and you reflect the reality brilliantly, I actually found this write quite profound; how the narrative gives sway to the reasoning of God, despite a sad reality...it reads true and honest, truly a great write
Wow Chris thank you so much!! Your comment just gave me more inspiration to keep writing. It means more to me than you know!!
Val ♥️
Nice write Val but i think if it concerns suicide the devil wins.
I think the devil only wins if you actually go through with committing the act of suicide...God won because I chose not to go through with it ;)
Val ♥
Your right Val and as bad as it sounds i believe it is a fact that everyone contemplates suicide at least once in there life. Love the idea that God won.