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Kisses To Walruses

Kisses To Walruses

Blowing kisses to walruses 
Cocooned, no metamorphosis
The taste of the reapers kiss...
Turns my rainbow black
 

Out in the void
Where dreams are destroyed
A schizophrenic paranoid...
Who daren't look back 

Deep in the slumber 
Of pharmaceutical lumber
The raft has gone under...
Bouyancy I lack

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Syd

Cheers Nigel 

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Syd

Thanks John

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India Morrow

Use of fancy words always helps sound fancy! Lol....continue to share! I prefer dogs to walruses but to each his own. 

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Syd

Do what makes you happy India. Each to their own. Be yourself and enjoy writing.

Take care  - Syd 

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Syd

You're braver than I am Lisa. I'm fearful of exploring my own mind for fear of what lurks in there ha ha.

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for the compliment.

- Syd 

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Gerard McGowan

now this poem was found in a patient's room after he went completely insane" 

Great poetry Syd.

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Syd

Thank you Gerard. Yes I would agree. The blowing kisses to walruses line was inspired by my wife loudly snoring lol. The rest is all me. 

Thanks for stopping by and leaving feed back. Appreciated.

- Syd 

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Silent Dreamer

Lol I had to re-read this a few times, such a clever write kept elusive, very alluringly so! I love the humour in this😂👏🏽👏🏽 amazing write Syd!

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Syd

Thank you so much Silent Dreamer. I'm glad you like the poem and especially the humour.

Appreciated  - Syd 

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Syd

Thank you Simon. Apologies for the late reply.

- Syd 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

He he woahhh woww what a scintillating poem, so very witty and funtastic to read. So some kisses are the grim reapers kiss while some are the kiss of life eh. Kudos!

Nice to read from u again, 
pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too

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Syd

Nice to hear from you again S. Thank you for reading and leaving feed back.

Appreciated  - Syd 

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