Poem -
Kissing The Earth
Gliding over bits of angel glory,
Downward as the mountain falls away.
A compelling force is part of the story,
Adding speed is what it starts to say!
As I depart the frozen wave; I float,
Then the force will not be denied.
My heart rises into my throat,
Now horizontal; from what I just tried!
If you want to fly like the angels,
Using their glory as turf.
You better have good landing angles,
Or plan on kissing the earth!
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Comments
Is this about ski jumping? When they go shooting down that huge icy slope and launching into the air to try and do the furthest jump? Because that is exactly what I saw in my head as I read this. Thanks for sharing x
Yes! I just didn't have a picture of ski jumping.
LOL!!...this is not only clever JIM.....but it also reeks of intelligent motivation.....this is (in my most humble opinion) extremely creative and brings with it the intelligence that only years of experience can use as the fuel of beautiful 'Braggadocio'......I LOVE IT!!…...ALL STARS & PINNED!!…...Bravo!!…...T xo : )
PS. WELCOME to COSMO dear poet brother!!…...LOVE & ROCKETS!!
Thank you so much! That is the best review I have ever received and means a ton! It gives me hope and encouragement! I like meeting new brothers !
Very nice and fun loving! With such dark sky’s it’s about time we saw a lil snow in the silver lining.
People cer
tainly do seem to need some enlightenment these days!
Thank You! yes summer in Texas is predictable too!
That was really cool and so clever. You are so good at that. Reading your poetry has given me another whole other outlook on words and the different arragements that we put them into.
Thank You for your support Ashley!
Jim simply a superb read that flows and so so cleverly creative in your writing and presentation.
And your final payoff line is so poetically and revealingly to die for.
A great fun read but so intelligently written.
Thanks for the heads up on this one Jim for I would have missed it and while reaching this page I noticed another among so many that caught my eye about a B 17 Flying Fortress and its crew and will read that now.
Jim 5 stars is giving me gip will try again later, for your poem more than deserves it.