Poem -
Night and Day
For a timeย
I dreamt
Night and day
ย in the colors
of her country
ย finding harmonyย ย
ย in the movement
ofย such a
ย mercurial landscape
ย and the essence
of this inspiration
ย like quicksilver
moved the quill
then faded
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Comments
Lauren you were created to be a muse, hey, glad you liked, that is very encouraging to a poet, cheers poetess
Delightful! Although mining for a heart of gold. May seem exhausting a times. Yet worth the agony. Once it's finally discovered. Great write!
thanks, prowess ink, anyone who can put a Neil Young song line in a poem is a poetry brother forever, cheers man have great eveningย (i love Neil Young, lol)
My dear Christopher..your mind is a treasury of gems which when translated into words on paper become the Crown Jewels! A stupendous poet! Thank you for sharing this particular jewelย
Lodigiana xx
thank you kindly, Lodigiana, your remarks have rendered me (almost) humble, lol...I truly appreciate you saying that, my friend, but I have this 'thing' in my head telling me 'don't ever feel you've done anything in this genre, keep learning,' I honestlyย love practicing and practicing and hoping to get a lil better with each write, if not for the gift of inspiration, not sure if I would have much interest in writing,ย poetry hasย humbled me, many times....nonetheless, I truly appreciate your encouragement, causeย I admire your work to the utmost; I know you're a great poet and very generous as well, so I bow to your kindness and inspiration, cheers poetessย
You are very welcome:)ย
Lodigiana