Late night thought
Up late insomnia kicking my ass
it looks like I just ate grass when it’s really just my face. All my thoughts ganging up on me all at once like it’s the mafia
2017 is approaching basic bitches will continue posting “new year new me” while I’ll just be sipping on my cup of tea
Depression and anxiety is part of this generation’s genetics. We are caught up in the aesthetics, hooked up in the materialistic mindset.
We live in a high maintenance society
Look put together for good impression but are you kidding if you saw how we really were inside you will see the unkemptness as long as the emptiness
People presenting themselves to be what people want them to be liked until you see their too colors shine. Kinda uncanny
Drinking that magical liquid and smoking the devil's lettuce to escape the real world and forget the bullshit. Making it a daily/weekend ritual
Too many people playing around like love's a game
Our society is fucked, we are brainwashed everyday by the media and the manufacture business.
Remember when kids were outside playing sports and writing with chalk, doing normal kid things like bowling, ice skating, plaster fun time going on adventures and etc. well now all kids do is play games on iPads or their parents or older siblings phone.
and now we are all glued to our phone stressing about if your Instagram is good and getting enough likes. you go to a party just to take snapchats
It's so hard to meet people these days because we depend so much on our phones. You don't have to go out of your way to write down your number to give to a girl or a guy.
Learning to read maps and the time are coming distinct cause everything is digitalized.
People are much more anti social now
When will people wake up and realize that technology is dangerous and can be toxic to society
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Hey SMAZZY!!....this was a VERY compelling piece of poetic prose...... and like any good writer..... it's obvious that you're an excellent observer of your environ...... some of these phrases and word choices that comprise them are truly powerful ,.....and could stand on their own...... and although most of what you convey here is truthful, well conceived, and BEAUTIFULLY delivered ........I still have to disagree with one thing...... technology ~as you've stated~can be toxic!!...... but my area of study and growing expertise is Metaphysics...... so I think that technology is necessary for us in SO MANY ways.... like saving our planet.....BUT...I take comfort in the fact that the human mind is evolving MUCH faster than technology....... we WILL be able to keep it in hand...... our vestigial organs are coming into play again ......sorry for rambling....I just love this type of write...... which you've done an outstanding job with...... you definitely have a gift for word-smithing!!.........ALL STARS!!...... well done!!......, and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?☀✴✳
Hi tony I appreciate you commenting on my piece that was a good point you came up with the environment as it also means a lot to see someone else has a heart for the environment.
My point on this piece is how bad technology influences your mind in a physcholgical sense. I be sitting with a bunch of friends and we are all are phones socializing but through the artificial way it just disturbs me that kids are growing up to be lazier and dumber because of how technology is changing the social norms.
But that was just one aspect of it technology is s curse in a blessing I just think people neee to be mindful how they use it.
Smazzy15, this is a very thought provoking poem to be sure and I enjoy and appreciate your point of view; you seem to speak from the 'inside looking in' as apposed to someone of my generation who could only be looking from the 'outside looking in' so I do appreciate your perspective and honestly feel it is educational. And bye the way I do have university educated children who echo your words about the sociological aspect of these times 'you' live in. A person of 'my' generation can only 'in part' understand where you are coming from though. I appreciate the 'snapshot' on your reality you give. Funny you mentioned 'writing down your number to give to a girl or a guy' I do know what you mean, but that ship has long sailed, it just made me smile that someone remembers people once did that. Anyway, this write is really well constructed and your ability to communicate well is commendable, I liked this very much, a very sharp write....cheers poet...the pull quote is terrific!
'It's so hard to meet people these days because we depend so much on our phones. You don't have to go out of your way to write down your number to give to a girl or a guy.'