Poem -
Lazy Summers Day
Eighty-Four Pins is my first collection of Poetry available now! Order on www.amazon.co.uk
Pavements melt,
The tarmac cracks,
The city creaks,
As it wakes,
It begins to yawn and stretch,
Slowly wash the sleep away,
It happens each and every day,
On this lazy summers day,
On the street,
Smooth jazz plays,
As lovers hold hands and sway,
Move their feet on the dusty street,
With each beat,
With each breath,
Hearts begin to melt,
Begin to mould into one,
As lovers dance their hearts away,
In the midday sun,
It happens each and every day,
On this lazy summers day,
By Sarfraz Ahmed Β© Copyright 2020
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Comments
Great piece of work. Love it!
Bigmoose, thanks my poet friend, I wanted this poem to bring summer to life, through music and sunshine!
Thanks for your feedback x
Yes, with a black cloud hovering over our summerΒ
this year, you have reminded us of
idyllic summers of the past.
Thank you for that.
Proud to announce my first book Eighty-four Pins is a my first collection of Poetry which is available from next week June 1st. It is a collection of sixty poems chosen at the midst of writing poetry.Β A small portion of the profits will go to Cancer Research UK. Please share and order from Amazon.co.uk the ebook is available to pre-order on Kindle, Kobo and Google Books!. Hope you enjoy it. Any reviews will be greatly appreciated.
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Fabulous write Saf! I can smell summer!!
Liked and stars!!!
Pratibha,
I can feel the heat, as well, thanks for your feedback.
Thanks
There is something dreamlike about this! A city so far away ...yet so close to us all. A real 'feelgood' poem x
Thanks I wanted to create a hot summer day in the city. Influenced by music...jazz on a summers day...thanks for your awesome feedback!Β
awesome write, a pleasure to read
Thanks so much. I wanted summer to come and all the bad things to go awayΒ
ββThanks again!Β
Brilliantly written
Simon, thanks for your feedback, my book is out in June so your comments give me the courage to carry on...
Your poem encapsulates my feelings entirely. What better than a lazy summer's day to drive Coronavirus blues away.Β
Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback, this is one of my favourite pieces, I dream of New Orleans and Jazz on a Summers Day, take care my friend.
ThanksΒ
Sarfraz