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"LEST WE FORGET"

"LEST WE FORGET"

The graves of the fallen lay witness
to the brave men who fought in war
Eulogy`s inscribed in granite, to immortalize
their names, to honor their valor

They fought blood drenched battles
suffered for their country,with heroic fight
Lived in terrible conditions, trenches
scurrying with rats. oh god the stench the sight

A toxic yellow peril mustard gas was released
the chemical weapon of the day
Causing physiological suffering with blisters
burns and rashes, causing men to scream in pain

Many died in agony in their fight for their countries
brave men, who died in vain
Seventy million deaths, twenty million wounded
for peace to once more reign 

"Lest we forget" we will remember
all died for freedom, in this global war
A slice of humanity wiped out so tragic
WE MUST LEARN from it, Enough now! Oh Please god no more.

Inspired by Richard Waters "Initial Engagement" 

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

You write fantastic inspirational writes too...

Maybe,  my new goal...

To write something that inspires you and see how fantastic it can be?

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Sparrowsong Thank you so much 
for your great comments they are very appreciated 
I get so much inspiration from everyone here and with this
one it was Richard`s great write
Hugs Debs  

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Deborah Evans

Hi Susan Thanks very much for reading 
and commenting
Best wishes Debs 
 

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Tony Taylor

Geez DEBS!!......I agree with Sparrow!!...... this is fantastic........ you just keep getting better and better........ this subject matter is amazingly well delivered through your VERY powerful imagery...... the stench, the rats, the gas, used in WORLD WAR is brought to graphic life here!!....... your poetry is evolving before our eyes.......a fantastic write ~ to say the least!!........ a pleasure to watch you and read you ......as you become the wordsmith you were always meant to be........ALL STARS...... excellent!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Tony After reading Richards " Initial Engagement" yesterday 
it made me think about the message he gave in it and i wanted to 
write my self about these horrible wars  and hope not to have them anymore
  I was at it all day yesterday but was pleased with it when i finished
You fill me with encouragement with your wonderful comments
T hank you very much my friend love n hugs Debs xo

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Richard Waters

We shall never forget sacrifices made to preserve liberty.

Stunning portrayal of the nightmare that was World War.

Hug. 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Richard Your right we must not forget 
Thank you for the inspiration from your great write and thank 
you for your lovely comments​​​​​​
best wishes Debs 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Cherie Yes your words are true history keeps repeating 
it self What happened in these wars should teach a huge lesson to all
Thank you for your great comments on this one 
Love n hugs Debs xox
 

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

We must never forget. We self stipulate our priorities as all God's children are free to do.  Some will run, from the horrors of humanity.  Others will stay, and try to correct them.  Many will die, in the name of peace!  The epitome of an oxymoron!  Well written dear Debs.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

Hi Larry You speak wise words my friend 
and i agree with you wholeheartedly
Thank you for your comments i appreciate them greatly
Love n hugs Debs xox

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Deborah Evans

HI Flower Girl  Thank you for your 
kind comments Richards  write was very inspiring 
love n hugs Debs  xo

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