Poem -
Letting Me Know
Everything happened in a sublime moment
I knew what those words of concern meant
I knew from that caring gaze into my eyes
That between us would never be any lies
Your heart had been longing to lay by my side
No more, desires of the soul could you hide
You had held on to a craving to be with me
Now, had come the time to finally set it free
You wished to be the one to turn my life around
In that moment, I understood what I had found.
I smiled.
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Lovely Write Richard, I love these lines
"I knew from that caring gaze into my eyes
That between us would never be any lies"
Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
Thanks for being there !
:) Best wishes as always !
Hey Richard. It is like a lightning bolt strike when you have found that one in your life . After one date I thought of her constantly. Could not get her out of my mind . That is when you know love is at play and you want to be with them forever . Great write hugs to you rock
It is such a feeling to find your soulmate !
Wishing you the best as always !
Hug. :)
Hey Richard it is a amazing feeling to know the you both love each other the same . Hugs back .rock
:)
You KILLED it brother!!.......that final line made this absolutely memorable my friend!!........just those two little words "I smiled"........changed this from an average to a stunning write........you are so dam good bro!!.............LOVE THIS!!...........ALL STARS!! PINNED!!.........wow!...........later tater!.........out.........T xo
Hug ! Glad you enjoyed ! :)
Best wishes to you !