Poem -
Lies
You said you’d never leave
you lied
You’ve left me here to grieve
to forgive, I’ve tried
from this torture I want a reprieve
you died
holding no cards up my sleeve
I’m fried
remembering the good times, relief
I’ve cried
they said I’d forget, deceived
they lied
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super!
thanks Elaine x
love you're write! congrats
thanks Asmaa all the best Susan x
lies biggest thing to ruin a relationship  good job susan       best wishs  tina
very true tina thanks x
Amazing! just amazing!!Â
Morris great comment thank you much appreciated susan x
You have amazing poems. Hope one day ill be as good as you!Â
its all art no-one in my opinion can really judge its how something makes you feel so you my dear are just as good thanks Susan x
So much truth in your poem...loved it! congrats on the nominations!!!
thanks Jacinta have a great day cheers x