Poem -
Life Changing
Murdered never coming back
never coming home
life is unpredictable
just want to vent out all of those feelings though
Nothing ever works always coming back
my life is just fucked up
wish I could take it all back
Stuck in these cracks
Nobody can change
immediately I’m left here
tied up In chains
Wish I could wipe those tears away
an ocean of emotion washing over me
heart beating like a steady drum
banging as the years go bye
Angels ask me why I’m here so early
my only answer words that should never be spoken
I dreamed to see her one last time
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Comments
A good first entry to the Cosmo world! I assume this is about a ghost. I don't understand the last line though x
The last line was meant to represent him killing himself to see her again but I’ll try and make that more clear thanks for your input
Ahhh... That does make sense... Perhaps you just need to change 'here' to 'her' in that last line?
Omg I never noticed that it was meant to be her lol
Haha...its easy done! All good now though...and it makes sense ?
wonderful poem
Thank you soo much
You are welcome
Very striking imagery, simillar to Romantic era poems.
Thank you for the feedback it’s much appreciated