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Life Encircled

Life Encircled

Atom and Eve, Adam a misinterpretation?
Her with the apple to perceive, the knowledge of all creation. 

Within darkness and pressures totality,
Creation of a single spark, a black hole gave us our known reality and lit up the dark. 

As the elements under pressure combined, equally dispersed the building blocks of everything including mankind, throughout this known universe. 

Atom was born on the Eve of creation, life arose unique and diverse, using it’s own imagination, a living universe. 

The structure of a living cell, resembles that of a solar system’s build, look at the map of the known universe and you can quickly tell that is a brain’s nervous system rebuild. 

The similarity of the mapped universe created within the singularity is life reimbursed...

Atom again misunderstood, named all of creation in this galactic neighborhood with it’s each varying combination. 

Life itself is robust, it’s only energy transferred, long after our bones are dust, your energy remains undisturbed.

Infinitely reusable, is this an afterlife?
Advanced knowledge can be confusable to new forms of life. 

Life’s used materials go into recirculation and ours one day will go back through a black hole, life granted and then the long emptiness are the heaven and hell of the living energetic soul.

Are we microbial life, living within a larger life form, existing to experience harmony and strife, here only to conform?

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The fish of the sea

You continue to inspire with your words Patrick, but this ones truly awesome, love your take on creation so very interesting. You might like my poem Boom about a similar topic, but I like this one a whole lot better. Kind regards. Fab write. The Fish of the Sea.

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Patrick Epperson

Thank you I will definitely check yours out. This is the controversial topic one that I was worried about posting.  

I’m glad you’ve enjoyed the read & wow you liked mine better!! 

p@trick €pperson 

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The fish of the sea

Aww thanks, Patrick, but you shouldn't be worried, I find that the Cosmos is such a safe haven for alternate opinions and ideas, but then again anything better than Twitter! XD. Again fantastic write. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea

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Yiyan Han

Quite interesting topic re the origin of our universe that we can observe to a certain extent. As you said in the above comment, it is very much controversial as no definite answer to the question: how the universe or universes were created. Big Bang is everything or nothing or just a fiction.

You say "The structure of a living cell, resembles that of a solar system’s build", but a living cell is much more complicated than a solar system, and in many aspects much like some type of galaxies.

Your ending question is very intriguing as well, and no scientist can provide an answer ;) Thanks for sharing.

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Patrick Epperson

Thank you for the review of my pen, I struggled greatly before deciding to post this one. The conflict doesn’t stop at the post either as I also am a spiritual person.(many of my poems relate to my spirituality). In my thought process the cell was a solar system 
and a galaxy a collection of cells(organs)...
regards 

p@trick €pperson 

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