~ LIFE'S DANCE ~

Awakening, she found she was still dreaming
Still sleeping a lavender-lidded sleep
The delicately constructed purgatory
Between being asleep and just being
Began to make some sense
Then, in a tiny burst of cloud-like upheaval
Her mind shattered the roof of glassy conception
She sat straight up in her bed
She swore in an intimate prayer
That she'd tasted being dead
That she'd been reborn into Life's Dance
A kind of symbiotic ballet of truthful romance
Facing a wall of force fed comprehension
A mini-minuet between elegance and tension
A most dazzling display of light in the darkness
Shining blades of bluntness sizzling into sharpness
Then,
She swore,
Never Again!
Never again would she be taken for granted
Given a gift of dreaming found in sleep supplanted
By the watchful eye in Life's Dance
By the wisdom found in taking a chance
By the restorative nature of morphing scenes
Or the genius of Life's Dance
She'd gathered in her dreams....
Tony Tayor
* final edit ( for: Dan )

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Comments
Oh dear...how do we ever compete with such wonderful words and imagery Tony...I am transported again into the wonder of life ...out of the darkness. Great work, pinned ?
Hi MARION!!.... what a 'way cool' thing to say.......I don't agree with the 'competition' thing (you're too good and uniquely your own for any kind of comparison)...... but It's such a nice thing to hear that you felt transported to some extent...... this is the kind of comment that makes writing fun and keeps it inspiring!!.... thank you so much my friend for the kindness and for the Pin!!....... hugs-n-smiles......T xo. : )
Thanx for the Vote and the Stars GREG ETSELL!!....smiles......T xo. : )
Hey Tony,
Wonderful writing, my friend. Like wandering through a dream.
Beautifully composed. I really enjoyed that.
M.