Poem -

Life's Outlook

Things aren’t going so well,
Trying to find people to give a bell.
So I can let off about my day,
Because there is so much I need to say.
As I scroll through my contacts,
I find myself going on my soundtracks.
To put me in my own little bubble,
To block out all the trouble.
I start to reminisce about things,
And how I have earned my wings.
To fly as high as the birds,
Because I listen to my own words.
That I am amazing and so clever,
I shouldn’t think any different ever.
If anyone ever tells me I’m not,
I will show them the things I have got.
A loving family by my side,
I’ll show you them and you can decide.
Because once you see how amazing they are,
You will see them for what they are - shining stars.
 

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Kelv

Putting a smile on ones face, from a poem that kept its pace. 

Words connected to a life, who's been through the same sort of strife.

Line by line ending in rhyme, slowly healing pain over time.

Chloe Flisher has a lot to say,  let's hope she keeps writing that way!

Your words connect on so many levels throughout your poems, the personality and feelings climb to the surface. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings.

Kelv ( MD my name on my daughter's profile )  where I started adding my poems until I signed up myself.

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Kelv

PS

My daughter's name on here is JayJay Jennie C.

Sorry, should have added this in the first message.

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Chloe Flisher

Kelv, thank you so much for such beautiful feedback! That made me really smile! So thank you! I will look for your daughter tomorrow I promise! I really appreciate the positivity! X

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