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LIKE THE PHOENIX

LIKE THE PHOENIX

Like the Phoenix reborn from the ashes 
she spreads her wings and flies.
Not looking back to her past life 
that`s gone now,on love she glides 
She soars towards the radiant sun
where happy ever afters,exist
she walks among angels, 
guardians of her soul,who help her
find the peace, she always wished.
 
Death for her was not the end
only a new beginning, a transition
to heaven, her paradise found.
No regrets no ifs no whys, just serenity, 
tranquility, and love felt all around.
One day I will be like you, that phoenix
I will soar towards the sun and bathe in its light.
I will meet you there, I have missed you so,
Two phoenix together.
mother and daughter from the ashes, will unite... 
 
 

 

 

 
 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lorris Thank you for your comments 
always a pleasure to have you stop by 
I appreciate 
Best wishes Debs 

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Lorna

I love this hope filled poem, Losing the person who knows you inside and out is so difficult, it's almost 2years for me since i lost my mother and still so very raw..Yet i feel she's in a better place and I to will join her one day...As will you with yours.... Beautiful piece 

Lorna xx

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lorna I am sorry you have lost your mother too (hugs)
I Agree it is so hard someday`s. Today was one of 
those days that i just wanted to talk to my mam 
So I  wrote a poem to her it helps me. I am glad you found
hope in it it was my intent
Thank you for your kind words and understanding 
Debs xx 
 

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Leah Yodico

Beautiful write Deb,  and very touching too ## missing someone we truly love ##

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Deborah Evans

Hi Leah Thank you for your kind words 
Yes missing my mam a lot today 
Thank you again for understanding 
Hugs Debs 

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Tony Taylor

lovely imagery.....painted with the hope and intuition of  a mother's Love.......the metaphor of the phoenix was an interesting choice........The enigmatic manifesting in the  magic of your words!!.........great stuff......but then......I alwaus love your stuff.........smiles......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo  ?☀✴✳

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Tony I was looking at photos of the phoenix 
I was thinking a lot about my mother too 
this just came out of me, I wrote it very quick
I m glad you saw hope in it.
Thanks for your lovely comments 
always a pleasure to read 
Love n hugs Debs xo
 

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Cleo Tomi Ola

Hi Debs, lovely lovely lines. Thanks for sharing. Warm regards. Cheers.

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Deborah Evans

Hi Cleo Thank you for stopping by and 
leaving your lovely comments 
Always a pleasure to read
Love n hugs Debs 

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Richard Waters

Astonishing moving work. 

Amongst your very best .

Thank you for sharing this touching composition.

Wishing you the very best as always. 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Richards oh Wow  Thank you for your 
kind words, I wrote this one quite quickly 
but I seem to always find it easy to write 
poetry for my mother,I think it is the emotion
you feel when you lose someone that was so loved 
the words just flow.
Warmest wishes to you Debs 
 

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Richard Waters

:) You have written a wonderful piece from the heart !

Thank you for sharing.

Take care.

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Anwer Ghani

So powerful and filled with high thoughts. Thank Deborah

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Anwer Thank you for reading and 
commenting very much appreciated 
Best wishes Debs 

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Wendy Wass

Hi Debs what a beautiful poem love the imagery of the rising Phoenix from the Ashes and the hope of all our

rebirths and being with loved ones again. One of your best x

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Wendy Glad you enjoyed this one 
I find the words just flow so easy when writing 
about my mother
Thank you for your lovely  comments 
They mean a lot 
Best wishes Debs x

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Larry Ran

My Dear Debs,

Your beautiful words bring tears to my eyes, for we both miss our beloved Mother's so dearly.  We both think about the day when we reunite in the Holy Firmament, Mother and baby Phoenix, never again to part.  I end with a Haiku for us.

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My soul cries with yours

Till we both see our Mothers

In wombs of Heaven

.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry Thank you for your heartfelt comments
and your lovely Haiku i appreciate your words so much
Sorry for my late reply 
Love n hugs Debs xox 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Merrill Only  you dear man would pick up on a line that I 
put in, which I thought no one would pick up on 
It was sad from my mams point of view because she did nt believe 
in the afterlife and therefore was petrified of dying it caused  her so much anxiety 
over many years,making her ill at times, she battled three different cancers through
her life, sadly the last one took her 
 That line was me saying I hope she is in next world and at 
peace now , I always wanted her to believe there was more after this life 
Thank you for the hugs and picking  up on that line my friend 
Hugs peace and love to you  Debs 

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