Lilac In Her Garden.......
I breathe the lilac on her, I knew it was there, I like it
The distillation could comfort me, still I feel drunken, and alive
The very soul of her reminds me, her smell drives to me to excel
The air around her, such scented sweet simplicity of lilac
She is my flower forever, in my garden I drink her in
And the Gods swirling around this dressing room
Are tempting me to take her, to the brook down through the wood
Where I gently unwind her, and wear my real face, naked and vulnerable
I am longing for her to touch me, the brook behind me, ripples and echoes
"Come find me", I am here the spirit of both of our souls
Just to kiss her, without her even noticing, like a guardian angel
Protecting his charge, in the garden, I can smell the lilac, of her
I find myself remaining behind as she leaves me in lilac perfume
And this garden has become my room, where I wait to find her
The gods have given me this shining example, and I know that I do not dare
For, to her, I'm an angel that gardens her love, and her lips from nowhere
And yet there is no denying, the lilac permeates, and lands everywhere.............
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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That is such a beautifully well written romantic piece T` I can almost smell the flower`s through your words. That was a real pleasure to read honey well done, a lovely piece.You should be very proud of that one along with all your others. Great writing. Love G xx
I LOVE YOU sooo much....I was really hoping someone would read this............I thank you my friend.......your loyal subject......tony
Tony Taylor,
Good write, I love it, My five stars
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi Mr. M, Thank you so much for catching up to this poem, I was afraid that it would slip by without anyone noticing, (I spent some time working on it),,,,,and as usual, you picked out my favorite lines......thank you for welcoming me into your family sir. My mother sends her regards and thanks for the lovely write on "Poets Pen".......her friends were most pleased............thank you again my friend......tony
Poet's love, likeness and affection with the flower 'Lalic' is echoing before the readers through this poem "Lilac In Her Garden"...I think it contains pale purple color,...I like the statement-
"She is my flower forever, in my garden I drink her in
And the Gods swirling around this dressing room
Are tempting me to take her, to the brook down
through the wood"
With Sincere Love,
Hi Rav, this is one of my personal favorites......thank you so much for commenting and really giving it a good read.........I really appreciate what you do in these comments kind sir, ....your friend .....tony