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Lillies

Nothing lasts forever

Lillies

I had some Beautiful  Lillies in a vase,         they bloomed, then they bloomed again, then they bloomed some more. 

They were the best Lillies  I've ever had, they lasted quite some time 
But, alas they'd bloomed thier last.
Now thier petals are on the floor.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

now they are Lillies no more, fun write.................................................Jim

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Jenny Brewer

Hi Jim, 
yeah ...it's life Jim.
Thank you.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

you 're very welcome! enjoyed the read! temporal life blooms and fades so we can learn a mortal lesson................................................Jim

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Tony Taylor

Hi JENNY!!.....this is so lovely in its simplicity and wonderful subtlety......with a rhyme scheme that sits so gently atop the formatting that it reads aloud like something magically romantic.....like a daydream from a young princess in a fairy tale.......One can almost smell the petals!!......a delightful read dear poet sister!!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......Bravo......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  :  )
PS. It's so nice to see you on the pages again!!

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Jenny Brewer

Hi Tony,
How wonderful to see it's you...hope you are well. Xx Thank you very much for your kind words on my short poem....I have been busy with other forms of art lately but I  will be adding more of my poetry here ..for a while...again xx

 

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Marion

Nothing last forever....beautifully conveyed in your write x

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