Poem -
Linger
another mourning song
Linger
Just because you cannot see me
does not mean I’m nowhere near
and
just because you cannot feel me
does not mean I’m less than real
I am not
gone, I need to linger
just to check that nothing’s wrong
I never
told you I might be leaving
I just could not find the right words
to place inside
this, your mourning song, for safe
keeping ..
Until this whole affair is over and
I amÂ
so very well and truly done .... x
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Comments
Oh Neville you go deep into a persons soul and speak from their perspective beautifully. In this case a beautiful sad perspective. This just makes my eyes well. A powerful read my friend, you have a giftÂ
Gwen x
.. I dunno about that, but I do have an imagination .. and that kinda helps .. maybe sometimes ................................................................... maybe .. bless you our Gwen & truly true :) x
Really cool write my talented friend! I so concur with Gwen!......................Jim
Shh' I won't say a word ..Â
......................................... bless ya Jim, you are way too kind though :) NevilleÂ
This IS indeed a SONG!!....It sings to the emotions of the reader......and has the rhythmic qualities of a true song......in fact, I can hear this done in A minor as that key lends itself to the melancholy, the forlorn.......It is a STUNNING read/ write that pulls at the heart strings and makes one fight back the tears.....PINNED!!.......it is in a word ~ BEAUTIFUL!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : (
.. it is always a pleasure Tony when I see that you have taken time to visit my scribbles .. I am mighty pleased that you found this particular one ............................... thank you my fine literary friend ..................................................Peace & AGT's
... Neville :)
So very beautiful Neville...you have achieved that rare balance..
exceptionally moving without being sugary. hugs x
thank you Marion .. N x