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Liquid Silence

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N.J. Tomcatx
Liquid Silence

Liquid pellets
Pellets slam
Slam gently
Gently into
Into the
The leafy
Leafy mire
Mire seeking
Seeking sanctuary
Sanctuary on
On vandalized
Vandalized park
Park benches
Benches retreating
Retreating into
Into gentle
Gentle liquid
Liquid silence

-njv (2023)

 

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Marion

Wow I don't think I've ever read such  poetic
and lamenting words to describe rain and benches.  Really excellent work NJ x

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N.J. Tomcatx

Thank you so much, Marion. I'm glad you liked it & value your feedback.

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