Poem -

Listen

Listen

Listen......just listen
I wake up everyday and see the people I see
I wish they would come over and sit close to me and
Listen.......just listen
Are you sitting close to me.... now listen very carefully 
Listen.........just listen
Listen to my thoughts can you hear what they say
Do you know that everyday I pray 
I pray that this pain will end and maybe one day soon my life will mend
I pray that this pain will eventually go Listen up now coz I'm telling you so
Are you ready ? Are you ready ? Are you really really ready ??
The pain that I feel it cuts like a knife
Growing and growing like it's the tree of life
Rooting and shooting getting bigger and bigger 
It blows like a gun when you pull the trigger
Listen......just listen
Are you sitting comfortably now listen very carefully 
I hide the pain that I feel everyday with a grin and the smile on my face hides the feelings within
I walk around smiling as if nothing is wrong but
The pain that I feel is still so big and strong
Listen....just listen
Are you sitting close to me just listen very carefully 
This smile that I wear I wear with pride
While I'm drowning in tears from deep inside
This grin on my face hides a lot of pain yet I still manage to wear it again and again
Listen....just listen
Are you sitting comfortably just listen very carefully 
Listen to the words that I'm saying coz with these words you know I ain't playing 
Listen these words are no joke and if you felt my pain it would make you choke
So listen....just listen
Listen with your ears coz with these words I'm sharing my own tears

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RG

Very heartfelt write, your emphasis with the repetition  of “Listen” made it really dramatic and fed into the emotions more as it kept me engaged without stealing the spotlight from the other words . 
heart , stars and pinned . 

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Karen Chapman

I wrote it with a beat in my head as if someone is rapping the lyrics........the words are in the style to go with a beat I think x thank you for your lovely comment 

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RG

That makes sense , I like to freestyle and read some of my writes to YouTube instrumental beats , it can give a write an extra dimension . Very neat and enjoyable . I’m a fan :) 

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Karen Chapman

It is a real shame that I can't do the vocals as I would like to hear this as a song with a beat x

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