little house of horror

In the dark of night
everything was still
the beast in the basement
was getting his fill
dragged in her costume
on halloween night
the pure little angel
was pulled out of sight
looking for candy and treats all alone
she dandered too far away from home
knocking a door ,waiting so still
treat bag opened for sweeties that thrill
he opened the door looked around with a grin
said "my!",little angel ,"come on in!"
"I have lots of little friends for you to see!"
a party inside ,thinking "just you and me "
the little angel barely eight years old
looked up at his face,did what she was told
a party with friends and sweeties and food
she thought to herself "this sounds really good!"
once inside ,he put his hand round her mouth
keeping her quiet so she wouldn't shout out
the basement cold ,damp and old
was her last halloween story to be told
the angel was killed and tortured for his pleasure
on halloween night all alone with his treasure
while all the other little witches and vampires
roamed the town together and went home
little angel was left all alone
the angel is still seen on halloween at the window
replaying last moments alive
but fear of the beast that resides within
keeps children from going inside
always watch and keep the fear
halloween night ,keep your young near
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this is a piece to make mothers and fathers aware not to let their children out on halloween night alone ,because it does happen ! children do disappear even on that night tina x
You have a very talented way of writing you should be a murder mystery writer. you could be the next stephen king. your poem is very dark and sad. a mothers worst fear. its why I keep my daughter near.
Its sick that, stuff like this really happens. Halloween should be fun day for kids. You made me feel this a little to well. I havent got to preveiw all your writing but your good.
rachel first thank you for the compliments ,and second i have done the job it was supposed to with even one mother /father responding.its a real good night for fun ,i enjoy it myself but some people ,not u or I let the children out on their own because its a night everyone enjoys .rachel thank you for seeing this tina x
Thank you for letting me see it you have a gift.
great Tina congrats x
thanx susan tina x
Nice dark write Tina, my favourite genre lol!! Congratulations on your nomination :)
thanx rachel .i thought you would enjoy this one lol tina x
Tina how chilling is this;
there are monsters out there, you bring
the message home, do not ignore this poem!
Well scribed, a reminder to us all.
A worthy nomination!