Poem -
Little Minds Lechery
In sinful paradoxical sleepÂ
Eyes alive,Â
Sharp as demon sightÂ
One breast exposedÂ
Supple for sucking,Â
Vulnerability measuredÂ
Unaware nightmares comatose slumber,Â
Lips taste like noÂ
Conducting orchestrated fingersÂ
Play symphonies of nirvana,Â
 Digress in REMÂ
Stir with desireÂ
For little minds schemeÂ
Throwing...fire....on the fire.Â
     Attentions begottenÂ
What morrow conscienceÂ
Will deem as rottenÂ
Pleasurable connectionsÂ
All but forgotten,Â
Something sick withinÂ
Loves you pretty, dirty, and usedÂ
Perhaps overwhelming drinkÂ
And your sexpot beauty, triggers,Â
Believe by endulgence timeÂ
Sexy spirits highly abused.
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Ha! Thats funny, thanks for the one star whoever you are. Why vote anything at all? Grow up.
I agree with your pronouncement, Devon (one star is childish; person craves attention to the extreme) the '1 phantom' strikes again; how creative!.... I gave you 5, and I can almost guarantee that I know what I'm doing....don't take it on, pal; it's the internet....hey, very cool write, man... has that stream of consciousness vibe to it; enjoy the internal dialogue and 'truly' creative wordplay....I would be proud to post this, very compelling, and I dig the tone; has a kinda 'drunken sex' vibe....you keep expanding poetic range, Devon applause!....liking this one a lot...cheers  Â
Hey Christopher, we just talked about that too, im not sweating it. Thanks man the feedback is much more appreciated than the stars. You can best believe brother there will be more to come. Like how you picked out that drunken vibe it definitely plays a part. Always good to have you stop by my page. Peace man, hope all is well.
Hey Devon their is no need to attack those who give you one stars. Their are merely cowards hiding behind  A computer with no one to see them . I have had people who gave me one stars before but they are entitled to their opinion unless they comment with cuss words on your write. You are a proven writer . My respect to you . Rock
You are right shouldn't of said anything they are cowards, and it didn't really bother me but I think the whole stars thing is stupid, it should be a like or a comment simple as that especially when we are getting fired up about it. I appreciate opinion Rock, very noble of you speak up.