The little whisper

The little whisper flew from her lips
like a star shining bright it carried through the night
like angels wings flowing in the wind
floating towards its destiny
fluttering with excitement
over hills and valleys ,oceans and seas
battling volcanoes and icelantic winds
it survived its rough journey
exhausted but never on the edge of breaking
it landed on his shoulder
tall and handsome he turns his head
something pulls at his heart-strings
a feeling he won't ignore
the little whisper spreads once again
and glows, spiritual is her gift
into his ear she leaves her message
his heart once saddened pumps with intense pleasure
those three little words
"I love you "
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Comments
this was a spiritual piece
for young Jai:) nice piece
Tina!
I Luv your poetry
it make my heart free
thank you Jai :)
aww thank you jai and your comments are always loved by me as is your poetry too . your inspiring to me for pieces like this . your friend tina x :)
ah tina this is beautiful faved and voted just gorgeous congrats x
aww :)
thank you susan , tina x
indeed a lovely write tina
three little words!!! the extent they travel some times, beyond belief!
super work here!
hope youre well!
thanx stephen i'm good thank you. it is amazing how far they can travel and how deep they can be felt as if the persons next to you lol another wonder of the world i would say lol
thanx for reading
tina x
Tina Moore,
Congrats on your nomination Entry.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you williams JI tina