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The little whisper

The little whisper

The little whisper flew from her lips
like a star shining bright it carried through the night
like angels wings flowing in the wind
floating towards its destiny
fluttering with excitement
over hills and valleys ,oceans and seas
battling volcanoes and icelantic  winds
it survived its rough journey
exhausted but never on the edge of breaking
it landed on his shoulder
tall and handsome he turns his head
something pulls at his heart-strings
a feeling he won't ignore 
the little whisper spreads once again
and glows, spiritual is her gift
into his ear she leaves her message
his heart once saddened pumps with intense pleasure
those three little words
"I love you "

 

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Jai Masters

this was a spiritual piece 

for young Jai:) nice piece 

Tina!  

I Luv your poetry 

it make my heart free 

thank you Jai :) 

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Tina Moore

aww thank you jai and your comments are always loved by me as is your poetry too . your inspiring to me for pieces like this .  your friend tina x  :)

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Susan O'Reilly

ah tina this is beautiful faved and voted just gorgeous congrats x

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Stephen Weyant

indeed a lovely write tina

three little words!!! the extent they travel some times, beyond belief!

super work here!

hope youre well!

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Tina Moore

thanx stephen i'm good  thank you. it is amazing how far they can travel and how deep they can be felt  as if the persons  next to you lol  another wonder of the world i would say lol
                                                                                        thanx for reading
                                                                                                      tina x

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Tina Moore,

Congrats on your nomination Entry.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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