Poem -

Live

Chicago will leave one burnt out. 

Its lack of love leave one wanting.

Producing always running youth trying to skip that phase of innocence. 

It and us, simultaneously creating one another.

Creating us by streets, by avenues, by boulevards.

Creating it by our lives as our lives are lived. 

So running youth bring to fruition 

What past livers of lives have tended,

And made so unapologetically beautiful. 

For Chicago night's promise of life is outside that window,

The life is there. 

In the alleys and hands of our friends who never sleep.

Life is in that car at midnight,

And daylight is daunting.

What we would all give for one Alaskan night.

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sparrowsong

Hello Jeremy...

Welcome to Cosmo! 

Chicago used to be the place to live...

Like many great cities it can bring a new face to it...

It would be so awesome if the cities could be safe, exciting and inviting...

Chicago had at one time had been a place I would have loved to have experienced...

Maybe, I will again one day...

Stay safe!

Best wishes to you and Chicago!

:)

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Jeremy Kuper`

I am glad you enjoyed my work. I have lived here in Chicago my whole life and I think it is a city that has the potential to create such unique artists and voices. I hope the violence will cease one day. However don't let it put you off of the idea of visiting. Chicago is a rough, yes, but with many diamonds. 

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Richard Waters

Transported into the heart of a city through poetry is no mean achievement. Good word selection and a love for the topic causes this poem to shine !

Wishing you the best !  :)

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Jeremy Kuper`

Thank you. Means a lot that you enjoy my work!!

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Richard Waters

:) Thanks for sharing your poetry !

All the best to you !

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