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LIVE FOREVER

LIVE FOREVER

If we were evolutionized to become immortal?

When noone dies, anymore...

Would war no longer exist? 

Would we step further away from the creator of our universe?

Would you be kinder?

Would you not?

If you could live forever...

Would you? 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Byd0nz

Nice thoughts, if no one dies means we would have got passed war and the whim of creation. Forevers a long time though, we could run out of think- ink.

Cheers

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sparrowsong

Hello BydOnz...

Run out of think - ink?

We would stay forever young...

Always new things to see...

Always inspiration somewhere? 

Which also say alot for the future of our our home our planet...

How different would people think?

We can think ourselves alot of things...

I don't want to live forever though...

I have so much to look forward too...

The whole journey and when I die I'm going to find Michael Jackson and give him a Great Big Hug and Kiss...

After God of course...

Then say hello to my family and friends and...

Back to Michael again...

OH YEAH!

I hope he's getting plenty of rest 'cause he's going to need it...

He'll see me coming and he'll probably run, but I will be able to fly...

:)

Thank you for your comment and support! 

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

I agree...

When we actually think about immortality on earth, it's experimental...

Imagine being ten million years old and this is it folks?

Forget about retirement...

What about having chidren...

Can you imagine having a child who's six million years old and they still live at home?

Now, they're married with children...

:)

One thing would be for certain noone could be murdered...

But, with that in mind rapists and robbers would never die either...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend! 

Love n Hugs 

sparrowsong 

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Leah Yodico

Nice question.##, I don't think so: I don't want to outlive my child, my family, friends,  and relatives ; when all of them turn to dust and here I am still coping the modern world, everything becomes obsolete ; I want to give room to the next generation; when the retirement age would be extended to 70,  and I my losing my sight,  couldn't talk, walk ; when the younger generation have to pay a higher pension plan for me ;

No!  I don't want to be a burden anymore on my family.  I want them to enjoy THEIR lives. 

This is the problem the Dutch government is facing at the moment.  Too many old people. 

To be at 80 but healthy is good for me. 

Thanks for sharing this with us.

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sparrowsong

Hello Soul Sis...

Through your words I see Heaven...

Never get sick and no more loss and heartache from death...

Paradise almost the Garden of Eden...

The only for me is if God's there too...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend! 

Purple luv and hugs xo :) 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Dblankportrait...

Robot woman?

You like the high maintenance type?

Something goes out then you I mean she needs new parts...

I could probably get you a pretty inflatable one with some patches...

:)

You could probably put her in the water and ride her like a boat...

You could actually have both...

They don't have a brain and feelings so there would no hurt feelings...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend! 

Best wishes and Blessings! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Leah...

Yes, that's if health is an issue...

But, if you could be free from all that and kept away from the face of God?

And that means there would be no more death for anyone on earth...

Everyone would live forever...

Thank you for your comment and support! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Sweet Sparrowsong,

.

No person on Earth would eschew immortality

To live forever and death never see

To worry not about their lives to end

And ever right here their time to spend

.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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sparrowsong

Hello Larry...

I have been watching science for a long time and never is something I no longer say...

I have learned that lesson well...

They are working on cell rejuvenation...

Trying to come up with a way to store our younger cells in hopes that it will stop dementia and other body deterioration...

Don't believe me...

Is fact stranger than fiction? 

People have things stored for cures of many things...

They don't really believe in God and they need to prove that it's not God in many things that it's science to explain many things...

Science still has many questions that they can't explain...

Thank you for your comment and support! 

Hugs, Peace and Love 

sparrowsong 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Sweet Sparrowsong,

I do believe you.  I guess the term "living forever" doesn't necessarily mean immortality, just adding many more years to our longevity.  I am sure with all the scientific research being done now, living to be over a hundred will be the norm in fifty years.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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