Living The Dream
He must work from home; life is a honeycomb!
He must have many friends; the line never ends!
His three year old will be proud; and express it loud!
Living the dream at thirty six sixteen!
Why does he choose to meet them one by one?
Does he go out to their car window for fun?
He is so inventive and very attentive!
Living the dream at thirty six sixteen!
Having four cars and a truck; must be wondrous luck,
Just being envious! could this be dubious?
They hauled him to jail, I think he made bail!
Living the dream at thirty six sixteen!
Seems he was selling crack, making it in the back!
Had to move away, the lawyers he had to pay!
But the auction you can win! then you can begin!
Living the dream at thirty six sixteen!
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Cool write about a lovely motor ❤️💙❤️PinnedÂ
motor is actually in a museum, because the pic i wanted wouldn't download to this site, but the guy is real! I just didn't want to show the actual ones. thank you so much for the pin!......Jim
Is "thirty six sixteen" an address or car's brand? Couldn't figure it out. Obviously the guy is rich for a reason.
It is an address of the house....Jim
Thank You Cherie for reading and your comments! I'm motivated that you believe it is great!....Jim
Wow there is a very deep meaning here behind this flippant write Jim..makes it all the more powerful a read my friend...great read đź’•
Means a lot from you Marion! thank You! ..........Jim
WOW!! JIM!!.....this is VERY cool.....I like the choice in subject matter......But...I REALLY like the rhyme scheme you chose to deliver this VERY compelling piece!!......ALL STARS! & PINNED!!.......well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thank You Tony!
Better sitting in one of those than driving around in a Mazada 3! Cool poem, Kind regards, your friend MaxÂ
Thank You Max!
I hope you are living your best dreams Jim.Â
Actually my dreams now are for my posterity to choose the right! My dreams are mostly nightmares because of the heart meds that keep me alive. It is hard to escape the pain, so this new venture of reading and writing distracts from my troubles, while giving what wisdom I have and try to help others with my words. I love your poetry and soo appreciate your comments and time! I pray all your good dreams come true!......Jim
Mission accomplished you have certainly helped me with your words and knowledge.
So thankful for you.Â
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Already! man I think some of my best is yet to come ! and can't wait till Dec.! be well and happy! ........Jim