Poem -

London in its prime

I looked up to the sky, clouds around                    
The white rain appears without a sound
I look up as the snow gently hits my face and falls to the ground
It’s the time of the year again this moment has come    
To put away our sorrows and have some fun
The highest hill
The highest height
Sit down on the sleigh and what a sight
The crisp white of London town
It needs not an introduction
But a moment, a second of your time
See London in the winter
Is London in its prime.

 

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Tina

Although Christmas is mot mentioned I think this had a very christmassy feel to it. You've created lovely imagery of the snow and fun to be had. Very easy to imagine the scene ...sitting on a high hill overlooking London ..in the snow.  A lovely first entry of a poem

A huge welcome to Cosmo  (Really proud of you) xx
 

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Cherie Sumner Taylor

HI Candy..Welcome to Cosmo!  I would love to get to see London someday in the snow...I have never left the USA....It sounds fun and beautiful....I love the imagery and fun you created...It gets me thinking about Christmas around the corner.  Thank you for sharing your first poem on here with us!  I enjoyed. xo ;) 

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Candy Racer

hi cherie, thanks for the comment, london is very nice in the winter and in the summer in fact, i would love to see america someday, maybe new york. i look forward to reading your other poems. :) 

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Ella H

WOW!! london sounds like a nice place to live. Hope to go there someday. Well written poem.

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Candy Racer

thank you Ella, i look forward to reading your poems
 

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Lee Cook

Brilliant poem loved it! Thank you for sharing 

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Angel

Nice poem angel

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