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LONDON'S CRIME RATE

LONDON'S CRIME RATE

All around the world people are going to wonder and talk 
The London crime rate is higher than New York
48 killings in our nation's capital so far this year
Not a statistic that brings happiness and cheer 

Why should this happen in our country today ?
The latest victim aged seventeen cruelly taken away
Chilling with her friends she meant no harm or ill 
Why then should people want to kill ?

Something needs to be done and very fast 
Or this killing will not I'm afraid be the last

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Greg Etsell

London cant be as bad as Detroit or Chicago ether place I would NEVER NEVER Go to and I have been Detroit

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Dean Kuch

It's terrible to think that a seventeen-year-old girl was murdered. Actually it bothers me to hear when anyone's life has been cruelly ripped away needlessly.
So sad...
Mankind has a unique ability of devising torture, rape, and murder to wreak havoc on his own species. Having said that, are we really the most intelligent mammal on Earth?
One has to wonder...
~Dean

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KIERAN1369

One has to wonder indeed Mr B 
My fear is that we are destroying our world so quickly which upsets me greatly 
 

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KIERAN1369

Sorry Mr K (I have been at the Easter eggs !)

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Dean Kuch

Hahaha, no worries, mate.
You're welcome. ~Dean ツ

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William Wallace

All the killings being done by young black gangs on other young black gangs  so sad.
 

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lodigiana

What a depressing statistic that is..maybe we need a 'Zero tolerance' policy ? Well written Keiran! 
Lodigiana x

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KIERAN1369

Thank you as always for being so supportive Lodigiana 

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