Poem -

LONELY AGIN

Lonely agin
its like a sad
song playing  
on the radio 
over the ocean
flys bird from
the heart of life
intill the death
lock of hell
rose in a room
rainbows in the sky
unforgettable word 
that the ocean washed away
lonely agin
 

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Jill Tait

Aww lovely but sad you lonely my friend xx

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Greg Etsell

me thank you Jill 
no I am not lonely 
just trying to keep up with
Cherie and matthew  
this poem is a old poem
I wrote it back in 1977 
when my girlfriend broke 
up with me at the time she 
was the love of my life
but today we are still 
friends 

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lodigiana

Such a touching and sincere piece. You have a wonderful way with words my friend which makes your writings so special.  Lodigiana x

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A Lonely Journey

Gregorian! 
I loved that! It has a beautiful, wistful, sadness laden quality to it that I love. (It's so me). Beautifully penned my friend! Thank you for alerting me to that! 
I love the ending! 
'rainbows in the sky
unforgettable word 
that the ocean washed away
lonely agin' 
Bravo, my friend. Sadness is where it's at because life never seems to cooperate with us. 

Matthew. 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Matthew this is a old 
poem I wrote back in 1977 
I wrote lot poems that year
lost most of them but remembered 
this poem the most 

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A Lonely Journey

Well, Gregor, I'm really glad you remembered it because I loved reading it. Keep on writing, Brother, you're great! M. 

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Marion

Hey Greg, missed this one...well it's all been said above and so glad it's not true xx

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Greg Etsell

Thank  you marion no its not true
this is old poem I wrote back in 
1977 some how feel this poem
was longer back in 77 if it was 
I cant remember all of it I wish 
I know what the rest of it was 
maybe I will come up with something
new to add to it some day 

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Chris Bond

A very touching poem on a love who clearly meant a lot to you , Beautiful .

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